To start off the second part of the advert the girl is looking adoringly at something in the shop window. She then walks off as in the next shot she is going to be at the counter inside a shop. At the moment this shot all moves a little too quickly for my liking, it doesn't do what I need it too. I like the way that the character moves away but the turn itself is far too jerky, unconvinving. She doesnt currently stop and take enough time to really look at what it is in the shop window! She also doesn't appear very interested judging by her body language, so perhaps I can make some refinements to make her seem like she is a bit more drawn in.