This time I really like the movement of the character, the timing is much better. I had to move all of the frames forward and extend the length of the animation to fit in more time for the character to pause and look at the beginning, and this really makes the whole thing come together. There is still a bit of a jerk to the turning movement which I can iron out in the next revision.
When I decided to give this shot the angle it is at I knew that when I rendered the scene there would be a really strong aesthetic reflection in the glass that it is facing. There will also be a reflection in the glass that the camera is behind which will add more interest to the shot.